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[[tribute]my Own Wanted 5]

Good effort.

This movie had very nice music that fits into the fight scenes, which is very good. Good sound effects too.

However, there are a number of things you can work on:
-The straps on his bag that he's carrying had the same color as his body. So it looks a bit like he has four arms of something.
-When the main character got shot, on the top-left corner there was a bubble and inside it were weapons switching. I just didn't get that.
-When he was climbing up the building after the building got blasted and got a big hole. You should have changed the color inside the hole and added a few details to make it seem like the inside of a building.
-Try to use thinner lines for the face and the diamond(anything small and with lots of detail really), otherwise if the lines are too thick it's unrealistic and a little unclear.

Overall it was above average. You've got the feel of an action movie, you just need to improve the art and the animation a bit.

Hope my review helped.

cashleycool responds:

Errr... Ok, your review helped so erm.. Dead?

["Winter"]

Nice music.

Nice to hear Dvorak's Humoresque No. 7 in this movie.

Everything is well drawn and animated. And what happened to the old guy? He's disabled + disabled + disabled, and was the skull his son or a member of his family?

Sherbalex responds:

the body parts were just there man. they were just there. i wonder if anyone actually went looking for that person.

[T.a.r.a.n.t.u.l.l.a.]

The art is great, could use more color though.

The people looked pretty realistic and when they moved, their bodies stayed in a consistent size and shape. I'm just confused about the plot and how the story had anything to do with a tarantula. The main reason that your movie was not rated higher was because of the lack of colors. If you can bring in more colors then this might even score high enough to be on the front page.

[Obstifight]

Nice.

The movements are really smooth, smoother than any of mine anyway. I think this flash is way underrated and you've improved a lot from your Lost series. Keep up the good work!

[parkour(unfinished)]

good job

This animation looked really smooth, the characters were constantly moving. This wasn't like many other stick figure animations where the stick figures would just beat themselves to death. This didn't have that much violence and was all about the movement of the body, so I would consider this a piece of art.

The few areas to improve on are:
1) The ground and the platforms were not drawn too well, try to use lines instead of brushes, or use brushes then smoothen it.
2) Sometimes the character moved a little too fast, I could not catch what was going on.
3) The main character should've had a different color to be distinct from the other stick figures, this way the animation would be less confusing.

Is the red guy at the end a boss? Anyway, great concept and style, I hope that this will be fininished soon.

matt2k7 responds:

their is 3 red guys garding a door where the boss is hiding